Your Eyes

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Jasmin (Account disabled) on Sunday, 02-Sep-2007 18:34:30

Hey all, here's one more poem for now. Tell me if you like it or not.

When I look into the eyes
of some people that I know.
I see eyes staring back at me
From the one who loves me so.
From a face of an angel
Only I can see
That these eyes are so beautiful
That are staring back at me.
They sparkle and shimmer
And show emotion inside
I can see the whole world in them
When they are opened wide.
I might not know much
But I know that this is true
That God made these beautiful eyes
And gave them to only you.
When I’m lost in your eyes
That seem to glisten and dance
I can hardly concentrate
Because they put me in a trance.
I get weak
And I cannot think
Because you leave me breathless
With just one little wink.
They light up when you’re happy
And tear when they are sad
They close when you sleep
And even flare when you are mad.
But no matter weather you’re happy
Or even if you’re blue
Your eyes will always shine with love
Just like mine do for you.

Post 2 by Selena Fan (Account disabled) on Monday, 03-Sep-2007 23:14:51

I loved it it sounds like a song.

Post 3 by YankeeFanForLife! (Picapiedra: king of the boards!) on Tuesday, 04-Sep-2007 0:15:37

That was nice.

Post 4 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Thursday, 06-Sep-2007 13:10:44

Its really nice, i like it. Good job with your poem. I bet it's for someone close to your heart. Your poem s hows a lot of positive emotions. Cool !

Post 5 by ocean blue (what you see! is what you get!) on Thursday, 06-Sep-2007 13:29:22

that was really pritty great jobsmile